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TOPIC

应用文预测:道歉信

Directions:

Suppose you had made an appointment with Jane, one of your best friends, to watch a movie, but you did not show up. Write a letter in about 100 words to her to

1) make an apology and

2) describe what action you will take.

Do not write your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li  Ming” instead. (10 points)

思路分析

如何完成一封道歉信?首先,你需要就自己的过错向对方表达歉意。其次,诚恳地说明缘由。在这一部分,需要合理编写细节,要求是逻辑通顺、表述流畅。以这道题为例,同学们需要编写爽约的理由,比如忘记了或睡过头等。无论是何种理由,表述都要清楚、诚恳,期盼获得对方原谅。

完成上述部分后,大家需要给出解决办法。这一点很重要,是获得谅解的重要因素。在这道题中,忘了一起看电影的约定,解决办法自然是约另一个时间看。但是这样还不够!要体现诚意,你开出的条件最好超过对方的期待。比如,考生可以写“地点、场次任你挑选”,或者选离对方最近的影城、最高端的影厅,还可以接送对方并请对方吃饭。

整体上来说,写信人应在字里行间表达歉意,且在结尾处再次表达歉意,以求得到对方原谅。

参考范文

My dear Jane,

Please accept my sincere apology for failing to show up for the movie today. I feel truly sorry for keeping you waiting for nearly an hour.

I am busy working on my thesis these days as the deadline is approaching. Feeling extremely tired, I decided to take a nap after lunch. Remembering that we had an appointment, I set an alarm clock for 3 p.m. But it was already half past 4 p.m. when I woke up. I did not hear the alarm clock, nor did I hear my phone ring when you called.

Please do let me know your schedule for next week so that I can invite you to our long-expected Michelin-starred restaurant. After that, we can see a movie together.

I hope that you can accept my apology and consider my suggestion for next week.

Yours,

Li Ming

参考译文

亲爰的简:

我对今天未能赴约看电影表示由衷的歉意,请求你原谅。十分抱歉我让你等了将近一个小时。

因为论文交稿截止日临近,所以这些天我一直在赶论文。今天我觉得特别累,就决定午饭后小睡一会儿。我记得我们之前约好今天看电影,所以我设了一个下午三点的闹钟。但我醒来的时候已经四点半了。我没有听到闹钟响,你打电话来时我也没有听到电话铃响。

请一定要告诉我你下周的安排,这样我可以请你去我们一直想去的米其林星级餐厅。然后我们再一起去看电影。

我希望你能接受我的道歉并考虑一下我对于下周的建议。

李明 谨上

重点句型

1.表示道歉的句型

Please accept my sincere apology for…(动名词短语:道歉缘由)

请允许我对……表示真诚的歉意。

2.表示道歉的句型

I hope that you can accept my apology and …(动宾结构:维持某种状态)

我希望你/您可以接受我的道歉并且……

3.强调某事件发生时间的句型

It is/was…(名词短语:时间)when…(主谓宾)

当……的时候已经……

…(时间)have passed since (某事件)

某事件发生至今已经过去了……

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